By: DeWalt Russ [2002-08-23]

A Faberge Turd

Let me tell you something about Ginger

The Chronicles of Former President of the United States X-Ray Johnson, In No Particular Order

What the reader needs to know:

X-Ray Johnson was born sometime in the mid 19th century, and soon found that he was an immortal American. These are the heretofore untold stories of his valiant service as or under the Executive Branch.


We met at the coffee shop, real incognito shit. Fred was past his prime by '69. Everbody knew, him most of all. The great MGM musical was a thing of the past. His fans now cowered in their midwest houses, terrified of the Negroes and the Longhairs, mournfully remembering Ike. I never liked Ike. The waitress was some fifteen year old New Jersey skank, probably had a Jimmy Page shrine at home to finance. She never paid him a second glance.

We knew each other by reputation only. He smiled without showing too many teeth as I shook his hand.

"I saw you foxtrot once," he said to me. My face flushed. When? "I think it was last November, at some charity bit," Fred continued. "Or an awards dinner. Rickles emceed."

"God damn," I replied, not recalling the evening, least of all his being there. "Had I known that the Master was in the audience, I would have fucking rehearsed! Did my conversation step measure up?"

Fred smiled and turned to look at the chrome espresso machine. He told me that he was impressed by the glide in my step, or some other generic compliment. Hell, I was satisfied. A false compliment from Fred is like a Faberge turd--you still cherish it until the day you die, illegitimate as it is. Little Miss Dazed and Confused came back with our coffees, plunking them down so that the hot liquid splashed out of the mug and on to the table, staining the newspaper Fred had so carelessly left there. She walked away and Fred took out a little flask from inside his tweed jacket. He poured the whisky in both mugs with veteran grace.

Our throats became warm and our tongues became looser. I told him about the time I was personally requested to teach the tango to a certain curvaceous blond named Marilyn ("I pressed my crotch to hers, and it was just like coming home. She thought I was initiating a little of the old Casting-Couch, and I stammered like an Iowa farm boy as I explained the Argentinian history"). Fred smiled in appreciation. I beamed with cameraderie.

"So, did you ever bag Ginger?" I said lightly. He chuckled, and I leaned back in my chair, one eyebrow cocked. There was a pause.

"Let me tell you something about Ginger," he said after half a minute.

* * *

We wound up in the showroom of an abandoned carpet store. Ironically, the floors were all hardwood. We had polished off half a case of malt liquor, and we set the other half on the windowsill. We compared moves, and I mimicked his steps for all I was worth. Of course, he flew away from me like a swallow. He taught me leaps and swivels that I doubt I could have performed if sober. Drunk as I was, I unfailingly collapsed into a heap, laughing with ever-diminishing self-consciousness.

Later we sat and tried to regain our bearings. Staring at the lights of the city, swirling and elongated in the green bellies of the liquor bottles. Fred was a quiet man, and he mumbled something--to himself, I realized, as the years passed.

I think he said, "They'll never get this on film."
Esther Williams [2002-08-23 03:12:18] Mr. Quackenbush
I think that Fred was a major cokehead; he was too skinny, too fast, and he smiled too much. Good tango dancer. The Esther Williams aquatic spectaculars were a genre unto itself. Hollywood needs more musical extravagonzos.
A Faberge Prolapse [2002-08-23 05:08:45] Vicarious
Muy bien! This was nice to read. I would even say slightly heartwarming.
Fred and Faberge [2002-08-23 07:54:37] posthumous
All blashpemy aside, Fred was an impeccable dancer, and this was a fitting tribute, I thought. Though I must confess I was hoping to hear a story about a Faberge Turd.

Darkness, I accept your challenge from the previous discussion, but I reject your choice of weapon. I will, however, give you free reign to pick any felt-tip marker you wish. We will walk 20 paces and then...... "DRAW!"
Quickdraw [2002-08-23 08:11:05] Mikey
Such a contest would give a somewhat-clever double-meaning to the term "tracers." As for weapon selection, go with one of those cherry flavoured ones... unless a different flavour has better fumes.
Ginger [2002-08-23 10:35:28] jana
One of my roommates has a cat named Ginger. Since the word "turd" is in the title, I spent most of the sopry thinking about how much the litter box smells, and didn't realize to which Ginger the story was referring until the very end.
As usual, DeWalt, I enjoyed your story.
Bravissimo [2002-08-23 14:29:10] Darkness
This stands well on its own, unlike my story so far. Although the disclaimer at the front leads me to wonder if this meeting is a social one or if X-Ray has been detailed to recruit Fred (whose last name I knew as soon as I saw the initials MGM) for some NSA black op, due to the surreptitiousness. This lead me to expect some rousing bit of cheap humor or cheesiness (YOU picture Fred replacing Brosnan as 007), but it never developed.

I'm already picturing X-Ray as a skinny, black version of Lazarus Long, due only to the background blurb. Not sure if this is a positive insight or not to you, but as soon as you mention "immortal Americans," those comparisons will crop up.

On a technical level, the pacing of the scene and natural flow of the dialogue is sweet. What I struggle with in depicting dialogue is avoiding the boring "Blah," he said, "Blah blah." formula. You neatly sidestep this, AND make it look effortless; not unlike Fred.
posthumous [2002-08-23 14:49:57] Darkness
While the felt-tip maker may be your weapon of choice, I find its permanence and instant-adhesive qualities limiting. I realize that matched weapons seem fair, but if put me up against a musketeer and give us both rapiers, I'm gonna lose. I figured we were both reseasonable unfamiliar with railguns, except perhaps in a virtual, Quake2 fashion.
However, I will allow you to decide: would you rather face a slighty worn stick of Berol Compressed Charcoal, or a freshly sharpened Emipre Woodbine No. 2-B (hard) ?

This challenge reminds me; I never submitted my drawing of Knifekitten, mostly because I don't want to have to ink the thing before scanning it. I will however dig it out of hiding in my linen closet (as kittens are wont to do) see what I can do toward sharing it with the thingsihate crowd. (I apologize in advance if his creator does not agree with my vision of him.)
X-Ray and figuring things out. [2002-08-23 14:55:35] DeWalt Russ
You brought up some interesting points, Darkness. One of the biggest problems in telling X-Ray's stories is that it's so much fun not to tell them completely. Everything you don't mention becomes a potential character trait. I let the reader fill in the blanks, which is fun, but makes it difficult to fulfill expectations with each successive story--right now I've only got a few orphaned paragraphs floating around. Maybe I'll try to finish one of them.
The elusive X-Ray [2002-08-23 15:07:29] Darkness
Of course DeWalt, my other thought was that if you continued to construct the stoires in this memoir fashion, you could allow hints of the backstory to slide in, to sort of leech in from the corners as it were. Occasionally of course you would give the reader a real answer, but my personal temptation them would be to tie it up at the end in a series of revelations that would send the reader scrabbling backward to look up things which were so innocuous at the time that they didn't even notice it. The much HARDER thing to do, not from a technical level, but as a creator, would be to let the story stand as written and force the reader to decide, with the hints provided, what the backstory is. Done well, it could be amazing. Flipside: done poorly, it's just a story that doesn't hang together.
My Duck Fred [2002-08-23 15:27:25] Mr. Quackenbush
When I was mapping a Dept. of Interior game preserve of several thousand acres, there was a boathouse on the river that was full of maybe 300 antique wooden duck decoys and several boats. The Udalls used to hunt there with their buddies before it was turned over for a public nature park. I took one duck decoy, and meant to go back for a few more, but when I returned, the boathouse was empty. The decoy that I have is inscribed on the ventral with the name, "Fred." Go figure!
cool!(?) [2002-09-15 13:07:35] Yugi
magilla gorilla, gorilla for sale!

what was this one about? X-rays? va-room!
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