By: Annna [2003-10-07]

Movie Reviews, No Adjectives

monkey skull contest #1

I was momentarily confused, I guess, and thought we were McSweeney's.

The challenge was to write a movie review without adjectives, the longest one winning. Only three people entered, which would have made me sad if they hadn't been the best contest entries I've ever seen.

I was also worried that the best one wouldn't be the longest, making me regret my sole criterion, but I was also astounded to find each one funnier than the last. Here they are, in ascending order.

3rd Place, Antwan Hearts (126 words):

First off, let me get one thing straight. I love the Powerpuff Girls. The only girl better than the Powerpuff Girls, is Sasami from Tenchi Muyo. Oh, Sasami, in death we will be together...
Anyway, I'm not going to win any skulls by talking about Sasami. The Powerpuff Girls' movie is about girls born from sugar, spice, and bestiality who accidentally have gunk spilled all over them. They quickly gain powers like lasers and flight and run around saving the city. However, the city shuns them because of that. This could be a message about our society like that time that we killed Jesus and he just wanted to sell us some cookies.
The Powerpuff Girls' movie is... uhhh... it's... goo... ba... uhhh... crap....I liked it?

2nd Place, Posthumous (154 words):

She is a vampire. She kills werewolves. They are having a war with each other. Who cares? Neither species gives a shit about humans, except this one guy. The werewolves want him. The more you get to know him, the less you understand why. The guy has no energy. He sucks it off the screen. Blah.

But Kate Beckinsale. Well, damn. She does her ballet of death and it's game over for the furries. This woman needs to keep making movies. She is the only life in this movie. Okay, well, Viktor the Vampire, too.

The dialogue will amaze you. You will wonder how anyone could have written such drivel. The vampires are Brits, of course. The werewolves are Americans. When you're a Wolf, you're a Wolf all the way! You pretty much expect the twists in the plot. But Kate is covered in leather, kicking ass. Worth the price of admission? You decide.

Finally, for a plastic monkey skull, the winner, Mobiustrip (572):

This is a movie about Kate Beckinsale's ass. Kate Beckinsale's ass is covered in latex. This is how films are made in Hollywood today. Films have acting, and films have explosions; this has some of both, but mostly it has Kate Beckinsale's ass wrapped in latex. The latex combined with a corset forces her ass into the shape of a heart. This is, in my opinion, the "heart" of today's theater. (Ha ha)

The story of Underworld is the story of a vampire (Beckinsale) and a werewolf (Scott Speedman) who fall in love. The vampires and the werewolves are at war and do not like this. Any more information about the plot will spoil the surprise for you, the viewer of this film. Needless to say, the plot twists and turns in many directions before righting itself, in the manner of a kayaker who has been swamped by a wave (no, the metaphor does not fit with the film, I just like to kayak.)

There are many things that work in this film. The lighting and the makeup work together to make everyone look like Goths, for as history and Vampire LARPers tell us, all vampires and werewolves look like Goths. In addition, Kate Beckinsale's character has the power to jump off of buildings without breaking her legs. The wirework makes it look like she is landing the way someone who can jump off buildings without breaking their legs should. The CGI makes the werewolves transform the way werewolves should. The interaction between the two lovers fits the personalities attributed to them without being overly "Smooch-smooch-I love you-I love you-I'll never let go." The movie also communicates to the viewer without having to beat him over the head with a two-by-four. All in all it left me feeling that I had not wasted my money.

There are a few things that do not work. Shane Brolly, who plays the character Kraven, also plays in the daytime WB show "Mutant X." This should give you some idea about his abilities as an actor. It is because of him that I take the risk of quantifying the acting in this film at the beginning of this review as "some", as I do not know if it is an adjective or a pronoun in that case. As it is, his acting subtracts from the acting in the film as a whole. Think Hayden Christiansen in "Attack of the Clones." He will hurt you the way my summer camp counselor hurt me, only without the candy or the trial or "show the judge what the dollies do together." Also, the ending did not happen the way it should have, as it did not involve Marilyn Manson dying. All movies full of Goths should have Marilyn Manson dying at the end or a Rob Zombie concert, take your pick. (The last is not a movie reference, just something I would like to see in a film.)

But, back to Kate Beckinsale's ass. It makes tears come to my eyes. It makes me wish I were a gay, even though I know I am not. (I do not own even one Ani DeFranco album, plus I love penises.) It makes me want to do a screen capture of a bootleg of the film, blow up the picture and get it tattooed over my own ass so I can look at it in the mirror every day and say "Damn!"

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Thank you Antwan, Posthumous and Mobiustrip. You've made us all very happy. Everyone else, please keep an eye peeled for further contests in the monkey skull series. The next one will not involve grammar trickery, as I have learned that the only thing harder than seeing adjectives is to stop seeing them, everywhere you look, in the corners, in food. Thanks to Pop for the tip not to strike through adjectival nouns.
[2003-10-07 00:35:00] twins
I was thinking about writing movie reviews, and then this contest began. I didn't end up entering though. These were better than I thought they would be!
HA [2003-10-07 04:52:00] The Cheat
Antwan got third again!!! hahahahah!
hey....... [2003-10-07 07:47:00] The Cheat
So, Antwan doesn't get a plastic monkey skull??? HAHAHAH!
Wow, Third place BOTH times. Maybe the next contest he can actually do better. I told him to write a movie review on Arnold and his muscles. Gooverner of CaliFoRnia.
tragic irony [2003-10-07 09:34:00] posthumous
you should have seen what I would have done had I allowed myself the use of adjectival nouns!
[2003-10-07 13:20:00] Nakoruru
Maybe I should submit something of mine sometime....
Wow [2003-10-07 13:58:00] mobiustrip
This is way more than I ever expected. Just lemmee dig out the notes for my exceptance speech.

(Ahem) Let's see: "I'd like to thank my roommates for keeping me humble by not helping me proofread my entry and thus learn too late that I don't know that quantifiers are adjectives, my obsession with monkey skulls/the English language for spurring me toward trying, and Kate Beckinsale's ass for being round and luscious.
Also, Robert Zdar, with whom all things are possible. Peace out.
back. [2003-10-07 20:12:00] Antwan
Sorry, I moved (about 500 feet) I know you guys must have missed me! I MUST win a monkey skull... somehow...
A Skull for Antwan [2003-10-08 00:13:00] tempo thanos
Cheer up Antwan. If recent history has shown us anything it is that you can ultimately achieve your (thingsihate related) goals, if you threaten to kill people, and start halfassed wars.
Half assed [2003-10-08 00:18:00] tempo thanos
When was the last time any one of you did anything in a whole assed manner damnit! We need to take the word back. Use it tomorrow. USe it with friends, coworkers, future inlaws, and on term papers. Actually I'd really love it if you use it in a term paper. Send me a copy (or post it) and I'll find something nifty to give you.
[2003-10-08 00:24:00] Eve
Ah yes; glorius gold, so-so silver, and shameful bronze.
Ahnuld! [2003-10-08 02:25:00] Hieronymous Biscuit
There once was a man named Schwarzenegger
Who came to America as poor as a begger
After a couple of years
And a couple of beers
He's now governor of the World's fifth biggest economy, go figure!
Propaganda Crap [2003-10-08 04:14:00] Hieronymous Biscuit
Yeah, Ahnuld likes to grope the women! What a load of propaganda crap! Didn't he start out doing fag porn?
Still "ha"ing [2003-10-08 07:35:00] The Cheat
I hope next contest antwan loses, LAST PLACE. Honestly his review was full of ...little girls. that is the only reason why he wrote that. Arnold is da goooverner offf Calliforniaa. HEHEHAHA
Arnold [2003-10-08 07:37:00] Fate Amenable to Change

Oddly enough a google image search gives you the kind of images you need at times like this.

Naked female bodybuilders are strangely asexual.

Imagine how freaked out we all be when he becomes president. Probably by some freak accident that means all the candidates above him get accidently crushed in hydraulic presses, or thrown into large vats of boiling metal.

Hydraulic Presses [2003-10-08 11:52:00] Hieronymous Biscuit
I reckon them muscle chicks could crush beer cans with their cooters.
Hey! Look at that. [2003-10-08 16:47:00] Antwan
New contest for a monkey skull... can't... understand... it... But... must... still... enter...
one word for California right now [2003-10-08 21:54:00] in a car
ANSCHLUSS

funny that his wife's name is "Maria"... I think it is all too clear now that we live in an evil universe parallel to the happy Disney movie universe.
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