By: Laura Noveck [2003-10-14]

Merit Award

like ice


we'll have to run a month of articles about farts to make up for this one


He hands me a pre-opened envelope addressed to my name.

"Here."

"What?" The envelope says Michigan Merit Award.

"Oh." Slightly surprised, "How long has this been in your pile of mail?"

"I don't know. I just got it." I know his answer is a lie because Sarah received hers a month ago. I know his answer is a lie because he mumbles, trails off, and takes one half step back with his left foot and stumbles. Which causes him to thrust the letter towards me even more potently. If he doesn't, he falls. He is an icicle hanging by a wick. Dripping, awaiting his breaking point, failing (desperately) to envision the future. "Here."

I secure the envelope from his swaying hand, past the anger that he again managed to open yet another piece of my mail, even after several warnings, death threats and curses. I push together the two ends of the envelope with one hand, and use the other to grip the contained information. My thumb and forefinger are careful tweezers. The information is a Soviet bomb, standing ready to abolish mankind.

I pull the information from the envelope. Time fast forwards. I am eligible for a 2,500-dollar merit award. Apparently, my MEAP scores were more adequate than expected. Damn my pondering.

"You know what this means, don't you?" My words are careful. I have learned to suppress any elation. Bombs explode with elation.

"What? Now you have to enter some kind of contest or something." He is monotone. My bomb is ticking.

I read the letter thoroughly. First at a glance, forward then bottom to top. Then I read through, questioning each word for its presence.

Tick. Tick.

I search for any deceiving loopholes. I know to do this because failure to do so had caused excitement. Cheap phone-order plastic products and diet pills breed false excitement, and close relatives are not welcome.

Tick.

A safe house. A break, I believe more now. I am sorry I lost faith. I finally caught a break.

"You mean, you have no idea what this is?"

"What?"

"Why do you open my mail all the time?" If he reads my mail, he could at least read it properly.

"I do not." The icicle drips; stress on the wick lightens.

"Ye-- This means I get twenty five hundred dollars for college."

Tic--

"Oh. Good for you." He is already half way up the stairs. There is no need to conceal elation. The bomb is a dud. The wick is taut. He is monotone.

I seek him for any extent of pride. I navigate my way through the kitchen, steering strategically, deciding the proper angle to present myself. I am at his back.

He is wearing a white t-shirt. There is a coffee stain on the portion that covers the back between his shoulder blades. He is condescending.

"You realize this means I get twenty five hundred dollars for college, right?"

"Oh, does it? Good for you. I guess that means you're working below your potential."

I close my eyes. A string, where the wick has many, breaks and makes a snapping noise, echoed by a field covered in permafrost and snow. I manifested into the dead field. I am alone. No one hears the snap but me. No one other than I can feel the snap in the back of my spinal cord. I unite with the permafrost.

He mumbles something about grades and lumbers across the kitchen, past me, to burn a half-year frozen venison sausage. The indoor grill receives more of a stare than I do. The grill needs a bad chiseling. The money for my homecoming dress lies within this chiseling, but now I wouldn't chisel that damn grill for the world.
Additional [2003-10-14 04:14:00] Javier Melugin

Unthinkingly my hand reaches towards the cooker, a heavy cast iron skillet sit's on a high gas flame. The hand picks it up, measuring it's weight. He turns towards me, and looks into my eyes, his face says it all, submission to his fate.

When I was a wee lad and went to school we used to have to write continuations of stories. They were always awful, but they would always reflect our own personalities. As soon as I read this the paragraph above is what leapt into my mind.

As always I blame this on watching too many murder mysterys on tv as a child. Especially one's without Columbo or Quincy in.
continue a story. [2003-10-14 04:56:00] Antwan
There's only one good way to return a story. Give it the old "OR IS IS?!?!??!!?" and then run like hell.
Moving Forward [2003-10-14 08:38:00] Hieronymous Biscuit
Is sometimes difficult.
[2003-10-14 14:45:00] minna
you know the best way to move forward?

bucher knife.
Or... [2003-10-14 16:59:00] The Cheat
Give it the ol' "OR IS IT!!!!" and then THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER!
congrats. [2003-10-14 17:21:00] Antwan
I award you one Awesome point The Cheat.
hmm... [2003-10-14 18:48:00] http://the mouse
i find this all very irrelevent.
damn [2003-10-14 21:44:00] posthumous
that guy has to be one of the most unsympathetic characters in all of confessional literature (second only to Ted Hughes).
ALL RIGHT!! [2003-10-15 04:36:00] The Cheat
I have 1 awesome point now!!! after losing them, from some unfair judgement.
Black Hole [2003-10-15 07:37:00] Hieronymous Biscuit
Some people are like Sunshine, that when they come into a room, they fill it with warmth and light. Some people are like a Black Hole, that when they come into a room, they suck all the warmth and light right out of the room.
Well, [2003-10-15 13:18:00] LauraLooM
that's my father. he is also the one who burnt the "free stuff" booklet I got one christmas... which still confuses me, partly because we don't celebrate christmas.
Four Points [2003-10-15 20:02:00] advice monkey
1. College is important. Get student financial aid, a scholarship, loans if you have to. Don't let your father have a hand in financing it, don't let him sign for anything. Basically, don't owe him anything. Find some other relative to have your college notify if you're in the hospital or failing your classes -- you shold be able to do that, if you're 18 or if there's anyone else who qualifies as a legal guardian.
2. Low-cost post-college living situation, planned in advance, for paying off loans if you have to. Eliminate the danger of ever having to go to him for anything.
3. If he's got some pot or a machine gun (I can't guess whether he's on the left or the right side of the hick coin; hell, he might have both, and be a sort of rustic Hunter Thompson), call the cops on him as soon as you're out of his house and he has no legal claim to you.
4. George Foreman grills suck. Venison is good, but he should use a skillet.
[2003-10-16 03:38:00] zhivago
i think the comments were below par here, but that's what you get posting here. the crowd is such a variable.
this was a really good piece. i enjoyed reading it; it was written well. thank you.
thank you... [2003-10-21 20:06:00] LauraLooM
advice monkey, I shall take your thoughts to heart. They are good, and may, come the near future and regained dignity, prove themselves usefull.
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