By: Annna [2003-11-18]

Night of the Apocalypse

monkey skull contest #3


special elongated trowels


First off, I know in the last monkey skull contest I promised an end to poetry, but then I remembered the idea I'd had earlier: limericks about Apocalypse Now. My sister Matie agreed that that was a great idea and contributed an example, which she demanded I put in the News column:

Cav'ryman Colonel Kilgore
Loved water sports as much as war
Burned enemy turf
'Cause Charlie can't surf
When you've napalmed the whole goddamned shore.

Wanting to appeal to a wider slice of thingsihate's demographic spectrum, I expanded the subject choice to include the fine film Night of the Hunter as well. I'd wanted to make it Death of a Salesman, but since the last context dealt with "The Death of the Ball Turret Gunner" there was a little too much repetition in the "Death of" titles.

We received many entries in varying degrees of humor and metrical precision; too many, in fact, to print them all. Antwan is to be congratulated for renting Apocalypse Now specifically to discuss it in verse, but the editors' special poetry judging group would like to suggest that next time he watch more than the first fifteen minutes.

A specially-created "What the Goddamned Hell" prize goes to The Cheat, who seems to neither have watched Apocalypse Now nor have any idea at all how limericks work:

Once was this old Goose
Who was very hot and loose
therefore he had many gooselings
and wore the bling-blings
but feared the Apocolypse Now


Astonishing, The Cheat! Keep doing that thing you appear to be doing! Finally, our winner - the man with the reference, the meter and the filth tied securely in place - is Posthumous, with his solo twist on Night of the Hunter:

Don't be scared by the terrible sight
of my left hand opposed to my right,
Hate's in this fist
from knuckle to wrist,
but Love keeps me happy at night.


My thanks to everyone who submitted an entry this week. Keep an eye out for the next and final monkey skull contest, coming soon to the bar on your right.
Eustwace R Dewoe [2003-11-18 01:43:00] twins
I've been away and didn't know about anyting!
Hey look, now I'm a fat jamaican guy.
Hey! [2003-11-18 04:40:00] Antwan
I DID watch the whole movie. I just didn't think that anything was as funny as when he was thrust into the shower at the beginning.
Also [2003-11-18 04:44:00] Antwan
I SHOULD get Posthumous's monkey skull and it was whoever DID BETTER in the contest and since I submitted two entries, that means that Annna looked at mine the most.
YES [2003-11-18 04:46:00] The Cheat
In your faces BIATCH!! I got the kewlest award yet!
OMG YOU GUYS [2003-11-18 04:50:00] The Cheat
Where is HB??? Did he enter? Where is he? Why hasn't he posted? Is he waiting to destory antwan? Does he have a STD? Did anwtan rock his face to much?
skull arrangements [2003-11-18 07:50:00] posthumous
Dear Antwan,

You needn't mail me your monkey skull. Simply set up an altar and sacrifice it to me. But remember to be reverent and worshipful druing the ceremony or you might catch fire.
But I won! [2003-11-18 13:50:00] Antwan
YOU should have to give me YOUR monkey skull because I had the better limerick. The contest wasn't who WON the contest, it was who wrote the better limerick. And in the eternal words of The Cheat "THIS LIMERICK IS BETTER THAN SEX AND RELIGION!". I rest my case.
apocalyose now [2003-11-18 15:42:00] Kirk pruitt
I HATE THAT TOPIC SO BAD AND ON LIMRIC CONTEST IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN ALL ANTWAN OR SHAWN. YOU GUYS SUCK. WITH A CAPITAL K
52lbs. Water&Diabetic [2003-11-18 17:39:00] Hieronymous Biscuit
At 6'2", and 260lbs., I felt sort of normal. I watch vids of guys like me throwing beer kegs and charging up stairs carrying 400lb. blocks of metal. I carry big block engines when I need to. But a few weeks ago, I started with edema in my feet, holding water, that spread all over my body until my skin became taut and non-resilient. So, my pulmonary doctor put me in sick bay, and on heart and water drugs where I could lose a maximum of water. Also, monitor blood-sugar; today I got 10-units of insulin. Catheters are not fun.
We missed you biscuit! [2003-11-18 19:50:00] Antwan
It just wasn't the same without you! I TRIED to visit you in the hospital but Annna locked me up in the closet after I called Matie fat.
Matie is Pointy [2003-11-18 19:55:00] Hieronymous Biscuit
I missed not being online. And I didn't like being reminded of my mortality.
you were sorely missed [2003-11-18 20:52:00] posthumous
for a while there I felt like I was in Antwan's bathroom watching him talk to the mirror.
Gargantua [2003-11-18 22:02:00] Hieronymous Biscuit
I liked the sort of Gargantua cartoon! It would be funny as a take-off on the phone commercial with the guy walking through the crowd pulling off heads, "Can you hear me now?"
Yay [2003-11-19 04:43:00] The Cheat
HB is back, Oh HB did you see my kick-ass award?? The best award yet, Har Har.
[2003-11-19 08:25:00] Dedas
well the award suits you, The Cheat. Nuff said...
Award [2003-11-19 08:53:00] Hieronymous Biscuit
I don't know about the award, but I enjoyed, "How I Changed the World After 9/11"
Hey... [2003-11-19 13:42:00] The Cheat
Thanks Dedas, that's why I'm here. To provide Mindless, useless, off-topic entertainment. Well, sometimes I'm On topic ("The Cheat: The beginning") Remember, The cheat doesn't speak english, he speaks..The Cheat.
How the world changed after september 11th [2003-11-19 13:54:00] Antwan
Ah, praise from Ceasur...
monkey skull #3 [2003-11-19 14:39:00] Kirk pruitt
Hey guys its the great Cam Pruitt here to say I think Shawn should win every thing here MAN!
For the love of.... [2003-11-19 18:17:00] Antwan
Enter fan club member #3 OTTER BEATER. He seems to... err... be having great difficulty using his nick name... and OTHERS nicknames...

Much like The Cheat, my friend has a tenious grip on the English langauge.
Yes! [2003-11-20 04:37:00] The Cheat
Otter Beater is here! Now what peoples...3 fan club members. Oh yea,....bored again.....
Posthumous [2003-11-20 06:14:00] Laconic
I'm offended, I'm here occationally to stand and...okay yeah I don't really do that much even when I'm here.
Yay Me..AGAIN [2003-11-20 17:49:00] The Cheat
I just love my award, Hopefully I can continue to win great awards like this one! Everyone knows it, but no one admits it, that I am King (or atleast over Antwan)
Note to the editors: [2003-11-20 20:27:00] Antwan
Please, never give The Cheat an award ever again, no matter how offensively sarcastic you THINK it will be. Thank you.
[2003-11-29 03:10:00] Hieronymous Boot Scat
yes! finally!
[2003-12-12 18:34:00] SATAN
U GUYS R HELLA STUPID
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